literature

This is Me - Now.

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Anger building.
Rising, threatening.
Overflowing in my
Mind.

Tears welling.
Swirling, falling.
Streaking my red
Cheeks.

Frustration mounting.
Twisting, clenching.
About to burst within my
Chest.

Despair plummeting.
Consuming, overwhelming.
Intending to swallow my
Soul.

Relief uplifting.
Sighing, breezing.
Raising me up to my
Feet.

Confidence brimming.
Striding, walking.
Placing hope inside my
Heart.
I really don't know what to say about this poem. I'm sitting in my writing class right now, really upset, really stressed out, and really, really mad. I don't usually write poetry, but this got some raw emotion out and I think it actually sounds kinda good, so here it is.

Criticism and ideas are appreciated, although know it probably won't go much further than this. It's just an outlet for my emotions.
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Guylus's avatar
That you were ever distressed enough to write these feelings to begin with really unsettles me... I know my words are cliche, but I'll offer them just the same: If you need someone to talk to, yell at, or beat up, look for me. Dunno if you'd believe it, but I care very much. :(